WINNERS 2023

I'm delighted to announce the winners of the 2023 Chapter One Prize! 

Out of a total of 887 international submissions in this blind contest, 21 chapters rose to the top for final consideration; it was truly a challenge to select the top three winners, and reading each writer's work was a pleasure and a privilege. In addition to the three winners, six writers were selected for honorable mention status, and twelve were selected as notable. This year's winners are from Australia, Canada, England, Germany, Poland, Spain and the United States. 

The writers showcased on this page represent a variety of genres for both adults and young adults. What their chapters shared in common is that while reading, I found myself feeling in capable hands, enjoying myself as a reader (versus editor), fully immersed in the prose. As the judge, I was looking for the following elements, and each of these writers ticked all the boxes: a clear point of view; a tone appropriate to the genre and story; an introduction to the protagonist; a sense of what the story would be about; a gripping opening scene; a vivid setting or settings; and a chapter ending that urged readers on to the second chapter. 

Thanks to all who submitted, and congratulations to our winners. Outstanding work, everyone.

Please read the winning chapters and follow these authors; they're all writers to watch!


FIRST PRIZE ($1,000)

PATRICK CUMBY, The Sixth Veil, Upmarket 

Asheville, North Carolina, United States


SECOND PRIZE ($500)

MORGAN KARPIEL, Bloodlands, Mystery/Thriller

Sułów, Malopolskie, Poland


THIRD PRIZE ($250)

LAUREN D WOODS, Man of Orpheus, Literary

Washington, District-of-Columbia, United States


HONORABLE MENTIONS 2023

These six entries really stood out among the top 21 finalists.

Bruno George, Seattle, Washington, USA, for Dead Revolting, Detective/Dystopian/LGBTQ+

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Michael McClister, Englewood, Florida, USA, for The Last Campaign, Political

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Mark Rhodes, Simpsonville, South Carolina, USA, for Transversion, Speculative 

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Natalie Sprite, Lamb Island, Queensland, Australiafor Almost Famous, Women's/Commercial

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Scott Thomason, Wallingford, Pennsylvania, USA, for Atomic Dreams, Literary/Speculative

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Mary Wood, Eugene, Oregon, USA, for The Blue Edge, Literary

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OTHER NOTABLE CHAPTERS 2023

Richard AttreeEl Médano, Tenerife, Spain, for Rhythm of Time, Literary

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Hiyaguha Cohen, Bluffton, South Carolina, USA, for The Invisible Red Thread, Historical

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William French, Mentor, Ohio, USA, for Kelso's Island, Action

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Thomas Graham, Honolulu, Hawaii, USA, for The Footscray Files, Mystery

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Monica Halka, Atlanta, Georgia, USA, for Trees, Monsters and a Ship, Magical Realism

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Tom Howard, Arlington, Virginia, USA, for The Shakespeareans, Comedy/Adventure

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Fredric Koeppel, Memphis, Tennessee, USA for Dilly and Mags: A Madrigal, Literary

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Heidi Marjamäki, Berlin, Germany, for A Legacy of Cranes, Horror 

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Karen Milner, Lancaster, Lancashire, England. for Devil's Claw Bay, Mystery/Crime/Thriller

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Pamela Nowina, Niagra-on-the-Lake, Ontario, Canada, for Undertow, Literary

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Susan Wilson, Whitby, Ontario, Canada, for Assumed Identity, YA Thriller

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Vicki Zalascek, Fayetteville, North Carolina, USA, for Alien, Joined, YA SciFi Fantasy

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