WINNERS 2023
I'm delighted to announce the winners of the 2023 Chapter One Prize!
Out of a total of 887 international submissions in this blind contest, 21 chapters rose to the top for final consideration; it was truly a challenge to select the top three winners, and reading each writer's work was a pleasure and a privilege. In addition to the three winners, six writers were selected for honorable mention status, and twelve were selected as notable. This year's winners are from Australia, Canada, England, Germany, Poland, Spain and the United States.
The writers showcased on this page represent a variety of genres for both adults and young adults. What their chapters shared in common is that while reading, I found myself feeling in capable hands, enjoying myself as a reader (versus editor), fully immersed in the prose. As the judge, I was looking for the following elements, and each of these writers ticked all the boxes: a clear point of view; a tone appropriate to the genre and story; an introduction to the protagonist; a sense of what the story would be about; a gripping opening scene; a vivid setting or settings; and a chapter ending that urged readers on to the second chapter.
Thanks to all who submitted, and congratulations to our winners. Outstanding work, everyone.
Please read the winning chapters and follow these authors; they're all writers to watch!
FIRST PRIZE ($1,000)
PATRICK CUMBY, The Sixth Veil, Upmarket
Asheville, North Carolina, United States
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SECOND PRIZE ($500)
MORGAN KARPIEL, Bloodlands, Mystery/Thriller
Sułów, Malopolskie, Poland
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THIRD PRIZE ($250)
LAUREN D WOODS, Man of Orpheus, Literary
Washington, District-of-Columbia, United States
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HONORABLE MENTIONS 2023
These six entries really stood out among the top 21 finalists.
Bruno George, Seattle, Washington, USA, for Dead Revolting, Detective/Dystopian/LGBTQ+
Michael McClister, Englewood, Florida, USA, for The Last Campaign, Political
Mark Rhodes, Simpsonville, South Carolina, USA, for Transversion, Speculative
Natalie Sprite, Lamb Island, Queensland, Australia, for Almost Famous, Women's/Commercial
Scott Thomason, Wallingford, Pennsylvania, USA, for Atomic Dreams, Literary/Speculative
Mary Wood, Eugene, Oregon, USA, for The Blue Edge, Literary
OTHER NOTABLE CHAPTERS 2023
Richard Attree, El Médano, Tenerife, Spain, for Rhythm of Time, Literary
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Hiyaguha Cohen, Bluffton, South Carolina, USA, for The Invisible Red Thread, Historical
William French, Mentor, Ohio, USA, for Kelso's Island, Action
Thomas Graham, Honolulu, Hawaii, USA, for The Footscray Files, Mystery
Monica Halka, Atlanta, Georgia, USA, for Trees, Monsters and a Ship, Magical Realism
Tom Howard, Arlington, Virginia, USA, for The Shakespeareans, Comedy/Adventure
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Fredric Koeppel, Memphis, Tennessee, USA for Dilly and Mags: A Madrigal, Literary
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Heidi Marjamäki, Berlin, Germany, for A Legacy of Cranes, Horror
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Karen Milner, Lancaster, Lancashire, England. for Devil's Claw Bay, Mystery/Crime/Thriller
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Pamela Nowina, Niagra-on-the-Lake, Ontario, Canada, for Undertow, Literary
Susan Wilson, Whitby, Ontario, Canada, for Assumed Identity, YA Thriller
Vicki Zalascek, Fayetteville, North Carolina, USA, for Alien, Joined, YA SciFi Fantasy